Seeking beta readers for my completed novel!

I am extremely excited to announce that I've completed my first new adult paranormal romance novel, Of Both Worlds, and I'm currently seeking beta readers to give me feedback on the completed manuscript.

I'd be happy to return the favor for other authors seeking beta readers. Of course, I have to warn you up front that my turn-around time during the school year will be slightly longer than in the summer. :)

Leave me a comment here, contact me through Goodreads or Twitter, or send me an email at josselynstark [at] gmail.com if you're interested. I will get back to you right away!

Here is the draft cover image and blurb to give you a taste of what it's about:

**Mature Content** 18+ for language and sexual content.

Lumina Bianchi is a typical twenty-something socialite. Except for her magical abilities, and the fact she’s not human. Plus, the whole royal daughter thing.

Okay, maybe she’s not so normal after all.

With an arranged marriage threatening to seal her fate as a royal housewife, Lumina enters forbidden territory on a mission to prove she’s more than a pretty face with the right last name. But she’ll need the help of the region’s enigmatic leader, Gabriel Merula.

Gabriel is—literally and figuratively—a blood-sucking predator infamous for manipulating everything and everyone to further his own agenda. For Lumina, being a pawn in others’ games is nothing new. But part of her thinks Gabriel might be different. A part she knows she should ignore.

Can Lumina trust Gabriel with her future—and her heart—before family pressures and political tensions destroy her quest for independence, and her only chance for true love?

Conflict... So easy, even a teenager can do it (in a second language!)

Yes, I know. I am a terrible blogger.

BUT I have an excuse for my lack of online presence these past few months. As a teacher, this time of year is always crazy busy. This year was even more insane than usual because I'm at a new school, teaching all new subjects!

I teach high school, specifically ESOL students (English for Speakers of Other Languages). It's exciting, fascinating, rewarding... but also unbelievably challenging, even when I'm teaching subjects I feel totally comfortable with.

It takes a lot of creativity and patience to teach high school ESOL. Intellectually my students are teenagers, but they're working with the language skills of an elementary student. Luckily, one of the classes I'm teaching this year is Literature so all the research I've done writing my first novel is definitely coming in handy!

Last month we were doing a lot around the theme of "survival" - natural disasters, extreme weather, etc. It seemed like a logical place to introduce types of conflict, which is one of the regular 9th grade English standards.

I admit, I sort of put the lesson together a few hours before class. That's just how it goes in teaching sometimes. (Okay, a lot of the time.) I hadn't really thought through all the challenges my students might have in terms of language.

Not surprisingly, about halfway through the lesson the kids were totally lost, and I was desperately trying to think of a way to get us back on track. Suddenly I remembered this blog post from the amazing Janice Hardy (who would make an incredible teacher, by the way!) over at the Other Side of the Story: The Best Advice on Plotting I've Ever Heard: Two Tips That Will Make Plotting Easier.

Basically, the idea is that story conflict can be reduced to this formula:

[goal] + but [problem] + therefore [solution/effect]

Providing "formulas" like this is actually a common ESOL strategy, except we call them "sentence frames." In other words, we provide students with the basic language they need to "frame" their ideas.

So, I scrapped whatever we were doing and told the kids to think about the last movie they saw and write down four things about the story:

(1) Character
(2) Goal
(3) Problem
(4) Solution

Once they had all that figured out, I wrote this on the board:

"_____________ wanted __________, but ____________, so ____________."

Plug in the character's name, goal, problem, solution - and, tada! A perfect summary of the story's conflict.

I'm a self-professed word nerd.

I admit it, I love words. And even after countless linguistics courses and years of teaching languages, words never cease to amaze me.

Which is why I just had to share that this week I learned the difference between discrete and discreet. Discrete means separate or distinct, and its noun form is discretion. Discreet means unobtrusive or prudent, and its noun form is actually discreetness.

Who knew? Maybe this is common knowledge, but it was new for me. And I was very excited about, if you couldn't already tell!

I also learned that publically is an acceptable way of spelling publicly, and franticly is an acceptable way of spelling frantically.

So this is what I've been spending my time on lately, instead of studying. Hey, at least I'm learning something. Although, I doubt any of these words will be on my comprehensive exams. But if there is some sort of question about publically funded education or discreetness with confidential information, I'm ready. :)

First blog post!

I hate writing firsts! So much pressure to say something profound and meaningful...

Well, there has been a lot of firsts in my life lately. I'm finishing up my first novel, I just completed my first Master's degree (and probably not my last, but I don't want to think about that right now...), and my first nephew was born last month. :) So, basically, it's been a busy summer so far.

Now that the ice is broken, I'm looking forward to my second, third, etc. blog posts which will hopefully be much more substantial!

Cheers, JS